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Tuesday, August 1, 2017
Mega Air Fun
Mega Air Fun!
By Heaven
One warmish sunny Sunday I woke up as excited as a cute little puppy prancing through a patch of bright green grass.
It was the day of one of my best friend Hayley HB’s 10th birthday. Hayley’s birthday was at Mega Air. Mega Air is a trampolining place. I got ready in a rush because I was way to excited. It felt like 250 years before mum and I left for Mega Air. When we arrived I saw Miriana and Chloe T were at the window inside Mega Air waiting for the rest of Hayleys guests to arrive at Mega Air.
When I excitedly entered the building we had to wait for the last guest to arrive. When the last guest arrived we raced to the video room to watch the safety video which played for about 2 minutes. After the video we were allowed to go into the trampolining room. My favorite thing to do there is the dodge ball on the trampolines.
It was an amazing day and I would go back to Mega Air any day.
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